Hello,

I would like to share a dark ride I've been working on. It's still quite unfinished, especially the beginning, but hopefully the general idea will be evident. Please let me know any suggestions or criticisms. 

Cheers.

Not bad I must say for a work in progress, you'll want much more foliage and scenery though.

This is very good for a start! I must agree with Chris however, it needs a lot of foliage. A LOT. Good work so far though!