this is my second time doing a park im getting there with the buildings but it will take me time like i said im trying (lol)

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the hills are way to steep for me but other than that its fine maybe add building like an entrance building to the park and for rides

Looks good.

I'd give the rides some better names and try and make that vertical drop coaster not so steep. It would kill peeps.

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Practice makes perfect H

It's generally ok, but you might want to play on an empty map with the teraforming tools. Then get to work on some of them pointy hills.

But, like I said, it's pretty good.