Hey guys
I know it's been a while. I decided to record a song and I want you guys to hear it and tell me what you think. I'm open to constructive criticism and I hope to do something like this professionally when I'm older. Before I give you the link, I want you to know that

1. My voice is bad, but I did my best in the song and compensated with a lot of reverb and I recorded the vocals twice (so there are 2 of the same vocal tracks). You can't really understand the lyrics but I'll take care of it whenever

2. The more distorted guitar track at the end might need to be polished a little bit, possibly even omitted from the song but we'll see

3. This is my first semi-successful attempt at recording a song on Garageband so I feel pretty accomplished even if the song isn't great.

Without further adieu, this song is "Going Blind" by Wal-Papr (my currently 1-man band)

https://soundcloud.com/wal-papr/going-blind

hey hey hey hey hey supergoldchicken remember jackthedog501?
hes me
hi
also i have some electronic stuff on soundcloud
https://soundcloud.com/qiaoxite-laweis

yeah I remember i think hahaha I'm not a huge electronic fan but i'll follow back!