Well it's not his best work, so I couldn't give it an A. The last one really rocked hard.. I am guessing he is working up something good..

i'm working on a book actually about to start page 5 actually so i didn't have time to go all crazy with an excellent coaster wanted to try something new and get some ideas so i might in the summer or have one in a month

Well it looks fantastic and im jealous.

Good job. I like the work you put in for filming and promoting your creations, that thing should be admired.

good luck on the book, and can't wait for another spectacular ride!

thanks here is a teaser to my book


Blood Lust


Prologue

She swept gracefully into the room. Her walk the way she held herself there was something different about her, the new girl a freshmen in high school Katarina Lilith. She passed my desk and right then I knew she was just like me, our eyes met and for the moment it was me and her. I was transformed back to the Egyptian period she strode to me wearing a see through metal sheer crown on her head with that crooked smile she addressed me warmly before placing her lips on mine.


My life sucks ever since I’ve been born my life has been nothing but heart ache. My mother and father died in a car crash and I was thrown from the car when I was 5. That was the first time I saw her. It was cold my head hit the pavement with a hard thud. The snow fell upon my lifeless body and that’s when everything froze a beautiful woman appeared. She was dressed in a green and black dress with a golden crown she spoke softly but I will never forget the words she spoke. You are my child it is not your time to go my son seek the answers in this life and you will be awarded what you find. She kissed the top of my head and disappeared. I was in so much pain I thought I die right there but a passing car stopped and I was saved.

My name is Gabriel Edwards. My mothers name was Gabriella my fathers Sid. I don’t remember much about them, sighs I wish I did I have a pendant that holds a picture of them. 1st day of school oh to joy. I’m 5, 8 160 pounds pure muscle. I have blond hair blue eyes and pale skin. I get the pale skin from my mother I was told. I live with my aunt and Uncle. There nice people sometimes overly nice Grim my uncle is rarely home but my aunt Elizabeth is a doll. This was my 1st day in high school and I was regretting every minute of it. I live in the town of troy this was the biggest high school in the area. Houses more then 4,500 students! We have 5 softball fields and 6 baseball diamonds. The football field was turf can you believe it! Well I sighed when I pulled up in my 2009 mustang, turning off the engine. As usual I got gawks not at me but at the car. My uncle insisted on me driving only the best cars I don’t mind it either. So class schedule in my hand I walked down the crowded halls bumping into a girl sorry I said its ok she replied already walking away. Right then I should have realized something was different about that girl. I shrugged off my feeling and headed to gym. Gym class salvation thank god it’s my first class. We went over the usual need locks for your lockers yada yada yada. I was thinking to myself just want to play basketball. The day sped by pretty fast lunch started I sat by some buddies from middle school. Kryssy and nick they are pretty much like married I swear! They have been dating for 2 years now. Nick whispered to me dude there’s a new girl and she is supposed to be smoking hot my friend had a class with her he was drooling. I laughed at that as Kryssy scolded nick with her eyes. I was hungry so I ate my food quickly making small talk with my friends.

Finally the last hour of the day came around. God avocado does this day ever suck. I sat down in my usual spot in the back when she walked in. Beautiful hazel eyed mixed girl she was black and Asian god was she ever gorgeous perfect skin tone. She met my stare and gave a weak smile. She started walking to the back room she sat right next to me she was a little curvy but wow had the best body I seen in a long time. Her walk was so graceful she was a little pale but nothing too bad like me. I greeted her; Hi my name is Gabriel Edwards. I held my hand out she spoke I am Katarina Lilith. She said shaking my hand, have we met before she said I don’t think so I replied. She shrugged and then I caught a whiff of her scent it was so intoxicating. My mouth started to water but I kept my mouth shut lips pressed together. This was going to be a biology class that I am going to love. The class went by super fast. She gathered her things quickly and a girl tripped her on her way out. Oops I didn’t see you she snarled then threw her head back and laughed. Caroline Crothers was the most popular girls of middle school no surprise she be one here she still isn’t over me I sighed deeply and rushed over to help her pick up her things. Caroline why are you being such a strawberry blueberry I said. Why would you say a mean thing like that she sniffled laughed and walked out the door. Ex girlfriend I presume? I told her yes unfortunately she still has the likes me I am truly sorry about that. No harm yet I will care of her on my own her eyes went black for a split second. Would you like to walk with me to my locker Gabriel? I was almost stunned with a huge grin on my face I said sure we got to talking and I found out she moved here over the summer her father got a job and they relocated from Alaska. Must be different for you to moving from Alaska how do you like it here? Its different I admit it but Michigan I hear gets pretty cold in the winter. Oh sorry for running into you this morning I was studying my schedule. That was you wow. So what you think about the neighborhood? Its okay I am not use to all the houses so close together we were pretty isolated in Alaska I loved the woods and stuff I miss it hunting with my mom and dad sighs. It’s not the same here dad is always working. Mom is just too cheerful ha-ha. We bought a house off of Marla drive have you heard of it? Yeah I live on that street did you take the bus here? No I walked here. That’s a good 4 mile walk would you like a ride home. Sure I love a ride home she smiled warmly at me. What’s on your necklace I asked her? Oh it’s my pentagram. My smile slowly disappeared remembering my mother and father had the same necklace along with my aunt and uncle I have to ask them what it means. I drove her home she moved into the house across the street from me. We said our goodbyes told her if she ever needs a ride let me know I waved and entered my house.

I'd give the coaster a low A. It was nice, could of been a bit more special.