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[DAI3] Avalanche

#1
After my earlier dai3 entry, i decided to make another one instead of Jiu Xiao Lin: Fear of china.

I give you these: Wild eagle, A terraformed coaster with 2 inversions and a lot of wind Tongue

Wild Eagle

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#2
Did i miss something? Whats happend to your "Asian" creations?

It seems that i inspirated you a bit infact of terraforming/landscaping Smile

Actually not bad, but the terrapainting need alot of re-work.
Currently it looks totally off in my opinion. Maybe i am the only one who thinks this Tongue

I would recommend to take a look at this nice tutorial:
Meerkat's Landscape tutorial

The layout looks not bad, but it's a bit short.
One or more twist and turns and/or a helix here and there could be an option so extend the track-lenght a bit.

Soo long, Cobra Cool
Keep it everytime fair and with enough respect for each other!
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#3
A small boring update

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#4
I see that its bad, alright then. I change.the backside (where the brakes are) into a twisty experience
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#5
Small and boring? I love that!
I need a new signature.
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#6
The eagle has arisen and turn around from the tower
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Where the straight coastertrack is, there will come a building
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#7
Looks good so far.

I would suggest to change the "barrel-roll" before the helix around the tower starts, to an "inline-twist" track piece.

BtW, as for an "Eagle" named coaster a Flyer type of coaster would fit a little bit better than an Invert one.
Flyers are allowed for the "DAI3" contest. Just think about it. Smile

Cheleste
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#8
I was thinking about to rename it in "Avalanche" but you're right, for eagle is a flyer the best.

But the story behind it will be the same, bout the Eagle.
Only name changed so it fits with the type and surroundings
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#9
Avalanche,
were the eagle is the headsubject by its adventure trough the mountain of Izale Paorar. You begin with a house were you grab things you need for your adventure, a walk into the house brings you to the long walkside heading to the station, praying for the eagle if he's arisen. Adventure begins! [/size]


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The wooden cabin were you ends, safely and well.
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#10
I really like the ground texture, seems very realistic. Just my personal prefernece, but I think there should be a few more trees, it's seems a bit too sparse... Just a thought. Also I think some stones dotted around could work as well!

Good job! Really liking the layout! Keep it up!
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